Kisune Karnon

[Kisune Karnon]

Name: Kisune Karnon

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Village: Otogakure

Rank: Genin

Nature Manipulation: Earth

Appearance:

At full standing height, Kisune is 4' 2'' tall. He weighs a meager 100lbs, but most of that is muscle mass. His skin is normally tanned due to how much sun he gets. Kisune has dark brown hair with has been styled flat with a spiked parting. His eyes tend to shift from blue to green and sometimes have a combination of both between transitions. He also makes sure his nails are finely kept clean and neat.

Kisune's normal wear comes in an oddity for normal shinobi. He wears a black sleeveless kimono with a V-neck style. The kimono goes down to his ankles and the ends are a little frayed from all the use and wear. Around his waist is a red cloth belt, which helps keep the kimono from slipping off. The belt also helps to hold his sword to his side. Also on his belt is a pouch that holds all his tools including wire and scrolls. Another pouch holds his kunai and shuriken for instant use.

On his non-dominant left arm, he wears a brown arm guard for use to defend himself. For footwear, Kisune wears some wooden sandals. He claims that they are much more comfortable and useful. The one thing that he does enjoy wearing though, is his white hooded cloak. This cloak he wears everywhere and in any weather condition. It also allows him to be mysterious.

Personality:

For first impressions, Kisune comes off nice and kind. In fact he makes friends like there is nothing to it. He will use his cunning ways to trick people into thinking that he will help them and be their best friend. However his true nature is that of deceit and back stab. After setting his victims up, he will destroy their trust in everyone and make them think they are living the wrong path no matter how long it takes for it happen. Kisune only thinks in terms of getting himself ahead of others and to be strong. He has made it his life's goal to be the strongest no matter what.

Though he is untrustworthy to everyone else, he is loyal to his home village. Though it only recently was made, he was born in the village and he will protect it with his life. Anyone who does anything against his village or any shinobi of his village, he will mark for death. As young as he is, he knows what he needs to do to get things done. When he is around people he likes or is trying to deceive, he is loud and in charge, but around people he hates or is about to kill, he is quiet. This can be noticeable, but no one has picked up on it yet since the ones who do spot it are the ones who get killed.

Jutsu:

Normal Jutsu
Bunshin no Jutsu [Clone Technique]
Kawarimi no Jutsu [Body Replacement Technique]
Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]
Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique]
Silent Killing
Temporary Paralysis Technique

Genjutsu
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique

Earth Jutsu
Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
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History:

Kisune's parents moved into one of the newly formed Otogakure bases while his mother was still pregnant with him. A month later he was born and he was one of the first born into the base. His father was taken into the Otogakure shinobi as soon as they moved due to Orochimaru's will. As Kisune started to grow, his mother was always home and taking care of him and the house. At night his father would arrive home and immediately fall asleep. This continued for the first few years of his life until he entered the Otogakure academy. As soon as he did, his father was home more and helping Kisune learn to be like him.

During his academy years, he went on every field trip he could. All he wanted to do was to gain knowledge and get stronger. These trips were to other bases and involved seeing experiments being done. The other students seemed to only be there to have fun, but Kisune was there to learn. Kisune took this as an advantage early on, by getting private tours and more information about the experiments being done. Even when he spoke to his father of this, his father told Kisune what was being done on him. Though he was told and knew of what was going on, Kisune was still a little shocked.

Soon enough the experiments and missions caught up with his father. An injury forced him to stay home permanently injured as the experiment failed. He was lucky to stay alive, but he was never the same. Kisune's father tried to keep him from staying on the same path, but Kisune wouldn't listen. He finished his academy years and even killed one of his classmates to prove that he was worthy of being an Otogakure Genin. Once graduated he was put into a squad and sent onto a mission immediately. The mission was a bit dangerous, but he held his own well. Since then he has been training on his own and learning more techniques.

RP Sample:

It was early in the morning when Kisune got up. His mother and father were already up and preparing breakfast. Since he normally wore a kimono, all he had on was his underwear. His parents said a hearty good morning as he sat down at the table to eat. His mother brought him some breakfast, eggs and bacon like always. With a smile he ate his food quickly, knowing he had to get going. "Thanks for the breakfast," he said as he placed his napkin on his plate once finished. Kisune then left the table and walked into his room to go get dressed. After putting on his sandals, Kisune grabbed his sword and put it into it's place on his side. Then he walked out of his house as he grabbed his cloak and said goodbye to his mother. His father followed behind him since he had to also leave.

Giving a nod to his father, they each took off in different directions to their respective areas. Kisune ran through the green field with some good speed and swiftness. As he passed by some people working in the field, they waved hello. He didn't respond because he was focused on getting to where he needed to go. Another reason why was because he didn't like those people out in the fields. It only took him a few minutes to get to where he was needing to be. He was early, like he always tried to be. With some time to kill, Kisune took out a kunai and spun it around one of his fingers. It didn't take long until the rest of his teammates arrived. Today's objective was an easy one, guard the fields. A meager task, but something that kept them busy.

The very fields he had ran through minutes earlier, he now had to guard. "I'll take the north side," Kisune said as he took off to that direction. His teammates weren't all that talkative too so it worked out well that he didn't want to talk to them. They were like him, wanting to be strong and figured it was better to do it themselves instead of trying with others. Now at his position, he scanned the area in front of him. There wasn't too much to look at since it was a plain field with no grass. A road also ran next to the field and so he watched over both directions to see if people were coming or going. It was going to be a quiet and easy day, something that Kisune didn't quite like. He was all about the action and today there would be none.

Notes:

Once he finds out about Akatsuki he will want to join.

He will intend to learn all that he can and to be stronger than any.

[Akemi Izayoi]

Name: Fine
Age: Dandy
Gender: Obvious
Village: Cool, another sound nin. I think you'll have a team.
Rank: Yup
Nature Manipulation: Down and dirty, eh? Pass.

Appearance: Everything seems good besides these couple of sentences.
His skin is tanned compared to his normal skin color of reddish-white. This doesn't make much sense, tanned compared to normal? Wouldn't he just be tanned? Unless it was in comparison to someone else's skin tone or differing the description from the face claim. However, if its the latter, it might be better if you just forsake the face claim.
The one thing that he does enjoy wearing though, is his white hooded cloak. This cloak he wears everywhere and in any weather condition. It also allows him to be inconspicuous and mysterious. Mysterious I can understand since it covers features, but inconspicuous is within my doubt. The cloak is white so unless he's around snow or among other people with bright clothes I don't think he'd be to good at blending into the crowd.

Personality: He's a cut throat sociopath? Fair.

Justu: Alrighty

History: This doesn't comply with the canon basis given in the Narutoverse. Note that we are an AU site, but the background evens, basics for characters, and areas are still pretty much the same as canon at this point. From what was given in canon, Otogakure is more of a series of hidden camps than one big village with a system.

Was his father already a ninja? You may want to specify that. If he wasn't then I doubt he'd have been able to learn much aside from just being experimented on by Orochi. If he was a ninja then he would have been a missing nin because that seems to be what Most of Orochi's force is made from. They usually had some form of existing skill already.

The way I see it, the environment within Sound areas where people do train would be much more "dog eat dog world" variety. So instead of this character fooling everyone I see him more acting as everyone else to not be the weakest link. The ones that got easily fooled might not have lasted long enough to actually get to the graduation.

RP Sample: This'll do.

Overall: I'd recommend pulling up the wiki to get a better feel for the Sound. That or just switching the Village. A more lax village with a friendlier atmosphere would allow him to fool the children there. If you have any questions please PM me and I'll do my best to answer them with a reply.

[Akemi Izayoi]

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